You make some good points about the presence of Divine Right in the first act of Titus Andronicus here. Your summary focuses a bit too heavily on plot points, however; do more to focus on the language of the scene. You do some of this with the allusion to Priam and the passage on the “head” and “body”; most of your analysis should be based on the text like this. In your research project, if you choose to focus on a literary text, you will need to do much more detailed analysis of this type. You will also be using Fact, Argument, and Theory sources to help support and enrich your points.